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The Next Generation Part 11 by *joanne-zeehond:iconjoanne-zeehond:





The streets of Konoha. A lot of people are meeting each other here. Most are just chatting a bit while doing their shopping. But a small amount of people are using their time differently. Namely with Gossiping. And today was no exeption. "Did you know?" "Know what?" About that cat, next door to me." "What about it?" "Well it's getting fat and believe me, it's not from eating to much." "You mean..." "Yes I'm sure of it. It's expecting." "But I thought it didn't came outside." "Oh no it doesn't. But what I've heard, the cat from one street away has climbed inside through the window." "Really?" "Yes, really. And also..." suddenly the gossiping woman stopped. There, a few metres away, three young people walked across the street. When the younglings had passed the gossiping couple, they continued. "Did you see that?" "Yes I did." "They weren't from Konoha." "Indeed they weren't." "I thought I saw a Suna-Headband on the orange haired girl." "Yes I saw it too. But did you see that boy? I don't trust him with that long coat of him."

{Infront of Hyuuga Compound}

"You're going to take your sister with you if you want it or not!" Hinata said. "But mom, I have training this afternoon. I can't bring Kaily with me then." "I don't care, Jyoanu. Your father had promised he would take her to work today. But she didn't want to go." "And why do I need to babysit then? Can't she go to school, like always on a monday?" Jyoanu asked his mother. "No Jyoanu, I told you. There's a flu going around the Academy and half of the teachers are ill. Including Iruka. So no school for today." Hinata said. "Fine. I'll take her. But it's not on my own free will! Come on Kaily." "Hai, nii-san. Bye mommy." the little six year old said. "Till tonight. Both of you." Hinata gave the girl a hug before turning to her oldest child. But Jyoanu had already walked till the corner to escape any hugs and kisses. "Kaily, if you don't come now. I'll leave you here." he yelled from there. "No nii-san. Wait."  
"What are we going to do today, nii-san?" Kaily asked her eightteen year old brother. "WE aren't going to do anything." Jyoanu said to her while walking towards the Hokage's Tower. "I first go to dad to see if you can stay with him and then I go training  with my team." "Oh."
"Oi, Jyoanu! I'm here!" a brown-haired twenty year old yelled. "Hey Rozu! Sorry I'm late." he apologized while walking to his teammate. "Don't worries. At least you're here earlier then Danieru." "Haha, yeah. But that isn't a difficult task. He's always late." "Hello Rozu-san. Do you have a new dress?" Kaily asked her. "Oh hi Kaily. Yes in fact I have. Glad that at least SOMEONE notices." she said, glaring at her blonde teammate. Jyoanu only sweatdropped.
"Since when is it "Take-your-little-sister-to-training-day" today?" the third member of the team asked. "Hey Danieru. Since my mom ordered me to take her with me, dattebayo." Kaily started to giggle. "What?" Jyoanu asked her. "You said that same word as daddy again." she explained. "I did?" "Yes, you really did. Didn't you notice?" Danieru asked. "No I didn't!" Jyoanu said shocked. "Oh my. Then it's serious. If you don't even notice you're saying it then it turns to be..." Rozu started. "What? WHAT!?" Jyoanu wanted to know. "A habit." Jyoanu's eyes widened. "Noooooo!" he yelled dramatic.
Danieru just started to look in his new book, trying to pretend he didn't belong with his blonde teammate. Just when Danieru wanted to turn his book open on the tenth page, his eye got something else. Three people were just walking inside the tower and he could've sworn that the darkred-haired girl looked at him before walking in.

"Well, it really been awhile hasn't it?" Shikamaru said when the three persons let him know they were there. "It indeed has uncle. How have you been?" the youngest asked. "I'm fine. And so it your aunt. She is a bit grumpy lately. I think she gets in her Menopause or whatever it's called. It really is troublesome, you know." "I would like to chat Shikamaru-Saama. But can we first go to Hokage-saame? Then we don't have done that and I want to check the boys out around here." "Sis, you're really unchangeable. Did you know that?" her brother said. "What? In Suna aren't that ,any cute boys." "Not now you're done with them at least." the boy replied whispering. What did you just say?" "Nothing."
"Shikamaru, where's that... Nani? Am I going crazy or is that really Team 5 of Suna?" Naruto said while just walking out of his office. "Good morning Hokage-Saama. But we're no longer called Team 5. Now we're just ourselves." "Yes, we even haven't got that many missions together anymore." "Why not?" Naruto asked them. "Well, it's a bit stupid to put two of the best Chuunin into one team, together with the strongest Jounin. Isn't that right, Teresa?" the boy asked. "Well yes, if that was the truth, Gure." "you don't have to be modest, Teresa-san. You're really the best Jounin in Suna, if you ask me." Gure answered. "Uhm, nii-san? I believe she meant about the Chuunin part. It's more like the best Chuunin, the best Jounin and one cow." Bechi said, sneakingly pointing to Gure. "Wow, thanks sis." he said while rolling his eyes. "Hehehe, I see you three haven't changed one bit."
Naruto, Shikamaru. Gure, Bechi and Teresa started to talk in Naruto's office. "The last time I saw you was almost five years ago when you three took your second Chuunin-exam." Naruto said. "Yes and even then we haven't seen the others. I wonder how much the boys have changed in the last seven years. What about you Teresa?" Bechi asked her. But instead of Teresa answering, it was Shikamaru who answered. "You can see by yourself. I saw them infront of the tower just right before you got up here. They can get in any minute now." and Shikamaru haven't said that, or there was already a knock on the door. "Come in."
"Dad, you really need to keep Kaily with you. We can't train if that little Blue-head is stalking us." Jyoanu said while entering the office. "Jyoanu, language! And since when do you barch in without even saying Hi?" Naruto asked while stading up to pick up his daughter. "Hello daddy." Kaily said. "hello little girl. Want to stay with me today afterall?" Naruto asked her daughter. "Yes." "Okay then." he said and took her to his chair. "Okay, First off. Why aren't you greeting your old friends, Jyoanu?" Naruto asked him, while sitting down with Kaily on his lap. "What? Where?" he asked looking around. Then he saw them standing there. But instead of saying something, his mouth fell wide open and he started to stare.
"Oi, Jyoanu what's keeping so long?" Rozu asked while walking in, followed by Danieru. "Oh hey, Teresa, Bechi, Gure. You're back again." she said. "Hey Rozu. How are you?" Gure asked. "I'm fine." "What are you reading, Danieru?" Bechi asked him. Danieru had walked in without looking away from his book. "Oh nothing special." he said while looking to her over his book. His eyes locked on Teresa's face, who noticed that and looked away with red cheeks.
"Jyoanu, are you allright? You haven't said anything." Naruto asked his son. "What are you looking at, Jyoanu?" Rozu asked. She tried to follow his look. His look was locked on Bechi. But it wasn't her face. "Eewl, Jyoanu. Get awake. You're drooling." Danieru said. "Uh, what? Yeah I'm fine." Jyoanu answered, with a dreamingly voice. His look was still locked on a part of Bechi. But now he turned his head a bit down to get a better few. Because he was so focused on Bechi, he didn't notice that Rozu started to boil of anger. "BAKA!" she yelled and hit him on the head with her fist. "Auch, why did you do that for?" Jyoanu asked, clearly woken out of his trance. "Because you were being perverted! You can't just stare at a girl's... Well... Uhm... TWINS!" Rozu decided. "Bechi looked down, getting the hint, and just smirked. Teresa, Gure and Danieru just started to blush and Naruto sighed while shaking his head.

One hour later, the six friends had left the tower. "So you have a little sister?" Gure asked. "Yes indeed I have. She's born a year after you three went back to Suna." Jyoanu said. "She looks cute. Her hair is darker. Your mother's genes?" "haha, yeah. She got the same hair-color as my mom's. But she did got the eyes of my dad." Jyoanu said worried. "Whay does it sound like that's something bad?" Bechi asked. "Well it is. According to the Hyuuga-council, that is. If she was born first, she would've been denied as heir of the Hyuuga-clan. That bad is it. They're constantly trying to kick her out of the family. But my parent's would not let that happen. Even my aunt thinks it's stupid to kick her out." he said, a bit more brighter then just now. "Why are you actually here? Is there something wrong?" Rozu asked. "No, we're having an holiday. A very... long... holiday." Gure said. "Shinobi's? Holiday? SInce when is that possible?" Danieru asked, still reading. "Since we did too many missions in the last five years. Apparently we're too good." Gure said. "Gure, don't brag. It's because we have done more then the half of the missions that Suna got in the past five years. According to my father, the other shinobi's aren't getting enough experience if we keep doing so many missions. That's why we were send on a  4 week holiday. So we came here." Teresa explained. "4 weeks?!?!" Jyoanu asked shocked. "Yes."
"Shall we pay Mitsunari-sensei a visit?" Bechi suggested after they had walked further. "That's a good idea. But where is he?" Gure asked. "I know where they're living." Rozu said and she led the others a few streets ahead. "Here it is. Number 19. Shall I rang?" Rozu asked, when they came infront of a medium mansion. "Yeah, let's go!"

After the bell had rang it didn't took long for someone to open the door. An little girl dark hair and green eyes opened the door. "Hello Lizzy. Are your parents at home?" Rozu asked her. "Yes. Just wait a minute. DAD!!! ROZU-SAN IS AT THE DOOR AND SHE HAS HER FRIENDS WITH HER!" the girl yelled inside. "Lizzy, don't scream." a familiar voice said, while the person got visible at the door. "Well hello you all. Long time no see. Please come in." the man said after seeing who it were that stood at his door. "Sure, Mitsunari-sensei." "Dad, I'll go outside okay?" the girl named Lizzy said. "Okay, but don't get into trouble this time." "I won't. Bye." Lizzy promised before going outside, while the others went in. When Mitsunari was talking to his old students, his daughter had other plans.

{At the hokage's tower}

"Kaily, I'm back with your drink. However it isn't very...." Naruto walked into his office. "...cold." There was something missing. "Shikamaru! Come here, please!" Naruto yelled to the room next door. "What is it?" Shikamaru asked lazily. "Do you know where Kaily went, Dattebayo?" Naruto asked, still holding the drink in his hand. "No, she was with you." "No I was getting her a drink and told her to wait here-ttebayo." Naruto said. "She said to me that she was going to find you because you took too long. So as far as I know, she was with you." Shikamaru told Naruto. Then it stroke Naruto. "Kuso. Not again. Hinata is going to kill me when she hears I again lost sight of Kaily."

While Naruto was talking to Shikamaru, his daughter was walking across the streets of Konoha with her best friend. "So you're sure nii-san is at your home, Lizzy-san?" Kaily asked her. "Yes, I'm sure. I went to find you, just when they got in." Lizzy told her once again. "Okay, then I'll get him for sure." Kaily smiled of the idea to set up her plan. "You'll get who?" someone asked from behind. Both girls turned around and they saw a adolescent girl with dark pink hair, enormous breasts and a gentle smile. "Oh, hello Franny. We thought you were on a holiday to your parent's house." Lizzy said, trying to change the subject. "Well I was just on my way to the front gate when I saw you two walking here. I just wanted to say 'Bye and till next week.' I'll be back at latest with the "Lover's Festival" so till then... No Babysitter for you two." the pink-haired girl said. "Oh okay. Well have fun at your parent's place then. Is your cousin going too?" "No, Saburo isn't coming with me. But I need to go now. I'll see you next week." "Bye, till next week." the girls said while waving at their leaving babysitter. "Well... How are we going to do it then?" Lizzy now asked Kaily. "You mean the plan? I'll tell you...."

{Back at Mitsunari's place}

"....so when they arrived at the ninth hole..." Mitsunari was just telling a Golfer's joke, when they all heard a scream in front of the house. "AAAAAH! HELP!!!!!" a girl's voice was heard. "That's Kaily! What's she doing here?" Jyoanu panicked, while getting up and rushing to the front door. "Kaily, where are you? Are you okay?!" Jyoanu wanted to yell while openeing the door. But when he did one step outside, he got soaked with real smelly water. "Aaargh!" he screamed when he knew what just happened. Jyoanu looked around him and he found what he was searching. In the meanwhile every one else had gotten outside too. "YOU!! Get back here! When I get you, you'll get sorry!" Jyoanu screamed while pointing at the culprit. "You mean that is IF you get me, Jyoanu-niisan!!!" Kaily yelled back with a huge grin. She started to run away and just when Jyoanu wanted to go after her, he fell down flatt on his face. "Auch!" he yelled. When he looked up he saw what had happened. Lizzy had bound a robe just around Jyoanu's ancle's when he was yelling at his siser. Now he wanted to walk, she had pulled at it with everything she got, which made Jyoanu fell straight forward on the floor. "Whoohoo!!!! MISSION COMPLETE!!!!" both girls screamed before running away, loudly laughing. "Lizzy, you're grounded!!!!" Mitsunari yelled after her, while getting the robe from Jyoanu's ancle's. "I smell like dead fish." Jyoanu moaned when he got up, robeless but still wet. "Well, it's a lot better then the last time. They had first threw huney on you and then they let you tripple so they could rub you in with feathers. You really looked like a dead chicken back then. "She's right you know. Better smelling like a dead animal, rather then looking like one." Danieru said with a visible grin on his face. "It's not funny!" Jyoanu yelled at his friend. But while Danieru was just grinning, the three Suna Shinobi's had difficulty with not bursting into loud laughter. When Jyoanu noticed this he got mad and he went home. The other's decided to go too and they said goodbye to Mitsunari.

The three Suna Shinobi's were all wondering what they would experience on their second day in Konoha. But one thing was sure. This first day was unforgettable.
©2008-2010 *joanne-zeehond
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YAY! FIRST TIMESKIP CHAPTER!
Hehe :XD: Kylie is a real b*tch isn't she? :XD:
Well... Uhm... nothing more except for this:
BHUWAAAH!! TT^TT The ending totally SUCKS!!!!! TT^TT

Anyway... I hope you still like :D

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:iconcalida:
Loved it, it's a good Shippuuden start!! ^w^
And Jyoanu's a perv. xD

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thanks^^
Yeah he is :XD:

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:iconcalida:
Welcome!! ^^
I mean, he has the Byakugan, we have no idea what he was doing when he was looking at them!! o_O XDXDXD

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:XD:

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Deviously Dutch Artist of many "talents"
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Ooooh I loved it! :D Amazing for the first chapter! :D

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Oh please, I don't turn heads. I fucking break necks.
:iconjoanne-zeehond:
thanks^^

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Style: Anime/Manga, but tries out new things so now and then.
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Welcome! :hug:

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